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"Finally!" Jacob grumbled, running into the woods ripping off his shirt. Having just thrown his shorts down next ot his shirt in the wooded area, Jacob's body shook once, then burst into that of a brown wolf.
That was a close one. Damn it, I can't be doing this around here too often. Gotta keep my temper in check...
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"Thank you, Moon. And don't mind Jake; he's... rude." With that, Alice darted off, taking down the first good-sized animal she came across. After feeding on this animal, she quickly found another with her vampiric speed and strength.
This is much better. I can almost feel the bronze color returning to my eyes.